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Here has been a summary of your editing intention. Since you placed "@我前男友手机" behind "my mission is to investigate," in Chinese there is a clear logical separation, "my ... is real" lacks the natural grip of linking the target, while "pre-meditated appears at the beginning, so the revised version retains this ambiguity, adjusting the pace of the...Читать больше

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