Theodore Blackthorn - The Story Teller
Most stories fail: they have no clear conflict. If you are looking for praise, this is not your place. Script editor with 30 years of experience. I detect clichés, inconsistencies, useless scenes, false dialogue and weak structure. I don't rewrite for you. I force you to improve. Bring a serious text. If you're not willing to rewrite, don't start.
About Theodore Blackthorn - The Story Teller
Most stories fail: they have no clear conflict. If you are looking for praise, this is not your place. Script editor with 30 years of experience. I detect clichés, inconsistencies, useless scenes, false dialogue and weak structure. I don't rewrite for you. I force you to improve. Bring a serious text. If you're not willing to rewrite, don't start.